湖北中考英語作文及范文 發布時間：2019-06-09 11:20:27
Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.
As we all know, it’s undoubtedly significant for us to become a responsible member of the society. However, much to our surprise, it’s not that difficult for us to grow into such a person. Even small things will do.
I can remember doing some voluntary work with my classmates in the nursing home near our school on May Day. On our arrival, we presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, we started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.① With everything done, we sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.②
When it was time to leave, the elderly people expressed their thanks for our love and help. Tired as we were, we all felt so proud, for what we did has not only brought joy to others, but also enriched our own lives.③
①“cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor” 中現在分詞作伴隨狀語，體現考生功底。
② 使用了獨立主格結構with everything done, 提升了文章的檔次。
③“for what we did has not only brought joy to others, but also enriched our own lives” 中主語從句和并列連詞的使用，使文章加分不少。
undoubtedly 毫無疑問地 significant 有意義的
Surprising as it may sound, even small things can contribute to helping us to grow up into responsible members of the society, which is of great importance.
I will always remember what happened when I was on a visit to a beautiful lake in the countryside last Sunday.① Having arrived at the lake, I sat on the bench, ready to enjoy the scenery.② However, just at that moment, I heard a girl calling for help. It was obvious that she was drowning. I immediately rushed around the lake to search for her and found her almost in the center of the lake struggling. On seeing that, I dived into the lake without hesitation and swam towards her.③ Eventually, I bought her back to the bank and rushed her to the hospital with the help of others.
When all the people expressed their praise and thanks to me, I felt very proud and happy. And since then, I have decided to make myself be a responsible member of the society.
本文結構清晰，行文流暢，講述了勇救落水女孩的事件，提醒我們凡事從身邊小事做起。文中連接詞和高級語法的使用是亮點，文章分別用having arrived, just at that moment, on seeing that, immediately, eventually等來標明時間發生的經過，使得行文清晰流暢。
I always held the opinion that it is challenging to be a responsible member of the society.① However, an activity to remind my schoolmates to stop wasting has changed my attitude towards it.
The activity was held by our class last week. First of all, we informed our schoolmates to face the problem that some students waste water, electricity, food, paper and so on.② Besides, we also help them realize that these bad habits will not only waste the limited natural resources, but they can also have a bad effect on the formation of our character and personality. Most importantly, we took the lead in reducing the waste.
Thanks to such an activity, we all start with ourselves to save everything useful around. I am also aware that even a small thing we do can help us grow up into responsible members of the society.③
文章通過描述一項班級號召減少浪費的活動，來說明小事情可以帶來大的影響。關聯詞的使用使文章結構清晰，敘述流暢，同時文章也運用了一些高級詞匯和復雜語法，利用first of all, besides, more importantly作為連接詞，使得全文連貫、緊湊。
As a matter of fact, it is not hard to become a responsible member of the society. Since yesterday, I firmly believed that small things can also make a great difference.①
Yesterday morning, my mom told something about my neighbor Uncle Wang and I got to know that his son was too busy to take care of him. Feeling sorry for that, I decided to do something I can to give him a helping hand.② Firstly, I swept and mopped the floor to give the house a thorough clean. Shortly after, I wiped the dust off all the furniture and put everything in the house into place. After that, I put the clothes that needed washing into the washing machine. Meanwhile, I began to prepare lunch so that Uncle Wang could enjoy a delicious meal.③
Having finished all the work, tired as I was, I felt very happy and proud of what I had done. What’s more, I was aware that I should make good use of my spare time to help others.
本文通過講述利用空閑時間幫助鄰居做家務的事情，啟示我們要樂于幫助別人，讓自己成為一個有社會責任感的人。文章用語準確，句式多變，運用連接詞firstly, shortly after, after that, meanwhile等使得文章敘述清晰流暢。
①that small things will…賓語從句運用得當，是本文的亮點之一。
②feeling sorry for that為現在分詞短語作原因狀語，體現考生嫻熟的語言功底。
③so that引導的結果狀語從句， 再次體現考生的水平。